Torin/Darren WhoEver (wolfieboy) wrote,
Torin/Darren WhoEver

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Connecting a disconnected mess

So, I'm looking for advice on how best to have written my NorWesCon, take 2 post so that it doesn't look like it was written by someone with ADD whose meds seem not to've kicked in yet. I'm just not sure how the various bits could've connected together without mentioning everything that we did. That would've been worse than disconnected, it would've been boring. I also don't remember _everything_. The other problem was that some things were connected in topic while others were connected in time. Writing seems to be a 3-D (or 4 or 5 or …) process at times and confining myself to the English language can be difficult. But, hey, that's one of the major purposes of this journal.

So, any advice on adding connective tissue to my writing would be welcomed.
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